Sunday, April 26, 2009

Jiwang sikit boleh?

It's early Sunday morning. I woke up ten minutes ago feeling very peaceful and calm. I decided to post this poem I found on the net three days ago. Guys, jiwang sikit pagi ni ek. It's not like I do it all the time pun kan. Bear with me. This morning is just one of the moments I feel like expressing what I feel. Karat seh! So, here it is....

Where you were,
I did not see you.

So close to me,
but yet so veiled.

Quietly you waited,
upon my invitations;
but still, somehow,
I failed to note of you,
yearning to be with me,
but finding
just a void.

So sadly,
you retreated;
bowed, dejected.

Finally when I knew
of you, your devotion,
so foolishly I did feel,
like a simpleton.

For I had looked
so very hard for you,
up/down/everywhere.

But I just did not looked
clear, in front of me,
where you were...

... just there.

Ok, you guys can puke now....

4 comments:

ida masri said...

b r e a t h t a k i n g l y
b e a u t i f u l....

u made my day!!:)

p/s: u might not know me.but i know u from one of ur friends...

Eddie said...

Thanks for the comments Ida. So nice of you. May I know who is that friend of mine?

eiffa akmal said...

heheh....zaidi is jiwang-ing lah!!

Eddie said...

Sekali sekala je Eiffa. I am only human after all...